I know you feel things aren’t right;
There’s a gentleness in this that’s really striking. The rhythm, the imagery, the honesty — You wrote this with both courage and restraint, and it shows.
Very sweet of you, thanks AJ
Like this ; just a thought…what about deleting ‘their’ From the first line and both ‘ours’ from the second ?
That our souls somehow found their counterparts
In the depths of our minds and our hearts.
Great suggestion!
Beautiful and well versed
Thank you Manley ❤️
I love this, Jonathan!
Thank you!
There’s a gentleness in this that’s really striking. The rhythm, the imagery, the honesty — You wrote this with both courage and restraint, and it shows.
Very sweet of you, thanks AJ
Like this ; just a thought…what about deleting ‘their’ From the first line and both ‘ours’ from the second ?
That our souls somehow found their counterparts
In the depths of our minds and our hearts.
Great suggestion!
Beautiful and well versed
Thank you Manley ❤️
I love this, Jonathan!
Thank you!