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AJ Augur's avatar

There’s a gentleness in this that’s really striking. The rhythm, the imagery, the honesty — You wrote this with both courage and restraint, and it shows.

Jon hamp's avatar

Like this ; just a thought…what about deleting ‘their’ From the first line and both ‘ours’ from the second ?

That our souls somehow found their counterparts

In the depths of our minds and our hearts.

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